Brickton Student's Creative Writing

Marie At The Lifetime Resort and Water Park

By:  Niamh Duffy

One day my dad said, "Hey guys!  Want a fish?"  "OK, Dad, sure thing, Dad, thanks!" I said.  I was so happy, and I named it Marie.  Marie looked like a splatter of blue paint.  She reminds me of sushi.  She ate my brother's fish's tail off.  My brother was very sad.  I always watch her after school. 

Doodle Land

by Josh Plier

Once upon a time, there was a giant white world called Doodle Land.  In this place, there were colorful people, characters, animals and things beyond your wildest imagination.  When you get there, you hear noises of every kind: laughter, sadness, joy and even excitement.  There are creatures everywhere talking to each other in their own language, saying anything whether you understand them or not.  Feeling them can be very different.  If you feel Wreck-It-Ralph, you feel sharp pointy pixels.  If you feel Mario, it will depend.  But now someone has invented the Doomageddon, a doodle who is always up to no good.  In Doodle Land there's a machine far away from all the Doodles.  It controls and creates all the doodles.  One day, the inventor went and found the machine.  He pulled one lever and made all the doodles in Doodle Land black and white.  Without their colors, the doodles will lose their personalities.  So Kirby, the little pink character in Mario, went to the machine and created the most powerful doodle in all of Doodle Land.  His name was Mr. Josh Strong Arm.  He was brave, strong, handsome, had his weight under control, and was courageous.  He and the Doomageddon fought to the death.  The Doomageddon has an electric whip and Mr. Josh Strong Arm had his fists.  Soon they were fighting: left, right, up, down, side to side, kicking, punching, yelling.  Soon Josh and Doom were dead.  After that, Kirby went back to the machine and remade Mr. Josh Strong Arm.  Mr. Josh Strong Arm and the doodle lived happily ever after.

The Hollys

by Amelia Dolly

Once upon a time, there was a family.  Their last name was Holly.  There was Lily Holly, Greg Holly, Sydney Holly, Gretchin Holly and Olga Holly.  They had a bunch of family in Birmingham, Alabama.  They went to Alabama to celebrate Christmas and sang songs and had a fun time.  They went every year to celebrate and get a lot of presents. 

It was hard to go to sleep because of the 1,000 crickets.  They were all very happy and played with animals all day except for in the morning.  They were very grumpy because they couldn't go to sleep.  Then Lily had an idea to sleep in earmuffs so they could go to sleep and it worked.  They sang and danced and played with their cousins and had a good time and celebrated.  They had a bunch of good nights.  Then they had a big feast and were getting enough sleep.

Amelia Dolly (4th grade) and Vivian Natura (5th grade)

Music

Soothing, relaxing

Different kinds of music

Fun to listen to

Ellie Arnoldt (5th grade) and Simone Leinenweber (6th grade)

Rain

Rain falling to earth

Water dripping on the dirt

Footprints sinking in

Flowers

Day by day it grows

Into a beautiful rose

Blooming all over

Music

Fills your heart with joy

Helps you express your feelings

Inspires people

My Dearest Nintendo

By Tyler Flechs

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